Sentence examples for revision to make from inspiring English sources

And now those officials have another revision to make for the year starting July 1.

Is even this too much revision to make on philosophical grounds?

1) The manuscript needs revision to make the presentation more accessible to a general audience.

[Editors' note: the author responses to the re-review follow.] 1) The manuscript needs revision to make the presentation more accessible to a general audience.

The major handicap for the relevant OVI was the complexity of the template, which needs revision to make it user-friendly.

It should be pointed out that it is the LSU of the ribosome that interacts with a set of proteins imbedded in the membrane – a remembrance of things past.] Overall the paper will benefit from significant revision to make it more focused on conclusions which are strongly supported by the bioinformatics analysis and which ones are more speculative.

I do scores of revisions to make them so.

The worst thing is the constant revisions to make it read okay.

In this episode, the election is adapted into a screenplay that needs significant revisions to make it more believable.

It took Sachar several full revisions to make all the strands feel connected, he told me recently.

"I just finished No. 14, 'Playing With Fire," and have a few revisions to make, and then there will be No. 15.