Sentence examples for revision substantially from inspiring English sources

JDS supplied failing hearts and helped to draft the revision substantially.

We agree with the reviewers that the presentation of the theoretical model was rather terse and we have in the revision substantially expanded on the details of the theoretical model in the main text, including also the main analytical result illustrated in Figure 4. We also expanded the description of the model in the Materials and methods section.

Third, revisions substantially decreased detection of signal peptides whereas there was an increase for the other groups.

The amount of information available for estimation of a hospital-specific revision risk varies substantially between hospitals.

While disappointing, we hope that this process of revision will have substantially improved the manuscript and make it more likely to find another suitable journal for publication.

Third, risks of revision may be substantially biased (although in certain circumstances, for many analyses the bias of the KM method will be small and the conclusions will not change).

If the number is revised up 40K when revisions are released next month, will The Times lead with the statement "August job growth was revised up substantially"?

Due in part to continued growth in the utilization of primary THA, the number of revisions may increase substantially in the coming decades [ 5].

All authors contributed substantially to revision of subsequent versions of the manuscript.

The ICC (2,1) measure of agreement further supported item 1 needing removal and/or revision; ICC (2,1) increased substantially when item 1 was removed from the scale (0.317 with item 1 to 0.793 without item 1).

SJ designed the study, acquired data, interpreted data, revised the manuscript for important intellectual content, substantially contributed to revision of the manuscript during the review process and gave final approval of the version to be published.