Sentence examples for revising the section from inspiring English sources

They suggested revising the section on mutation to more directly confront the misconception that mutations are always adaptive.

First, I have largely revised the section on self-organization in continuously extended media and entirely rewritten the section on the Benard instability.

- The DSM-5 that came out in May 2013 actually revised the section called "mental retardation" to be renamed "intellectual disability".

We have also revised the section on phylodynamics extensively, creating a new section entitled 'Transmission dynamics of influenza B virus' (in the Results and discussion section).

We have revised the section of the Discussion explaining the topological argument for why release of the enhancer (or the presence of long DNA segments between recombination sites and enhancer) can permit additional subunit rotations.

In response to the suggestions, we revised the section entitled "A composite HECT domain catalytic center involving both HECT C-lobe and N-lobe" to address the concerns and to improve readability.

We have revised the section to further emphasize the point (including a reference to watch the supplementary video) and now use a term to describe this feature of grooming (cyclic transitions).

DPM supervised field work and critically revised the sections on mycotoxins.

This has been taken into account when revising the TACs section of ICHD-3 beta.

While revising the first section of the 14th Amendment may seem like a handy fix, it is ony a part of the much larger discussion on immigration reform.

JM drafted the methods section and critically revised the other sections.