Sentence examples for revising the presentation from inspiring English sources

The team space in the course website included detailed guidelines for the consecutive working stages: individual learning of the topic, beginning to work, focusing on the team subtopic, preparing a draft presentation, revising the presentation, presenting to the TA and getting feedback, and presenting and discussing at the miniconference.

We now revised the presentation of the construction of the chambers and added much more information.

We have revised the presentation of these results to make this point more clearly.

Accordingly, in consultation with the editors, we have substantially revised the presentation of the single-molecule work.

We have tried to revise the presentation to further clarify the interactions for which we do find evidence.

In any case, out of fear that this was not made clear by the text, we have entirely revised the presentation of these issues and left out use of the word prevalent.

Thus, the authors should make every effort to revise the written presentation so as to generate a text that flows better and makes a compelling case for the importance of the findings, despite the current lack of a common thread leading to NEC.

DMG was involved in data interpretation and presentation, revising the manuscript, and influencing critical intellectual content.

MF contributed to study design, data collection strategy, and revising the paper in terms of presentation of findings and discussion.

The authors thank Prof. Mark Litwin for his suggestions on improvements for data analysis and presentation and for revising the manuscript.

MTH carried out analysis of data, data presentation and participated in drafting and revising the manuscript.