SC was principal investigator of the original proposal, undertook sample measurement and analysis and participated in revising the draft for consideration; RH participated in data analysis and revisions of the article; HH participated in data analysis and revisions of the article.
London came up with the idea of revising the draft to allow for the possibility, but not the requirement, of a second Council vote.
Mr Major's proposals for discussion included revising the draft Basic Law which will become the constitution after the transfer for Hong Kong's five million people, most of whom will become Chinese citizens.
KHL, JIL, and IHK contributed to revising the draft critically for important intellectual contents.
I'm revising the draft now, so I'll stay mum until I feel like it's close to final.
But he's spent months fleshing it out, editing and revising the draft, with the help of an ever-growing body of dozens of collaborators from an illustrator who worked with him in the Balkans to children's book authors and teachers and panels of friends' kids.
MMW participated in revising the draft.
YP participated in revising the draft.
FXW participated in revising the draft.
RS have been involved in revising the draft paper critically.
MS was involved in critically revising the draft.
