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DM prepared an initial draft and MKR, BKA and AH revised this draft and assisted in finalising the paper.

All authors then helped revise this draft until final document consensus was reached.

IN contributed data to the MONIKA database underlying this methodological investigation and critically revised this manuscript draft by bringing in ophthalmological expertise.

StS was principal clinical investigator for the MONIKA register underlying this methodological investigation and contributed a major part of its clinical patient data; furthermore she revised this manuscript draft by bringing in the trial site perspective.

ASM planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

JRG planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

MK planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

SMS planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

AMcE secured funding for this study and revised the draft paper.

MW conceived and developed the design of the study, developed ethics application and obtained ethics approval, conducted literature searches, undertook and supervised data quality assurance, led the first draft and revised this manuscript and commented on subsequent versions.

DV individually drafted and revised this manuscript.