Sentence examples for revised the presentation from inspiring English sources

We now revised the presentation of the construction of the chambers and added much more information.

We have revised the presentation of these results to make this point more clearly.

Accordingly, in consultation with the editors, we have substantially revised the presentation of the single-molecule work.

In any case, out of fear that this was not made clear by the text, we have entirely revised the presentation of these issues and left out use of the word prevalent.

The team space in the course website included detailed guidelines for the consecutive working stages: individual learning of the topic, beginning to work, focusing on the team subtopic, preparing a draft presentation, revising the presentation, presenting to the TA and getting feedback, and presenting and discussing at the miniconference.

We have tried to revise the presentation to further clarify the interactions for which we do find evidence.

Thus, the authors should make every effort to revise the written presentation so as to generate a text that flows better and makes a compelling case for the importance of the findings, despite the current lack of a common thread leading to NEC.

As some examples: We extensively revised the text to clarify our presentation and our interpretations as requested.

JRL participated in the design of the study and the experiments, designed the anesthesiological setup for the experiments, performed some of the statistical analysis and graphical presentations, and critically revised the manuscript.

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Richard Greenberg revised the book.