Referee Comment: "Real time examples" should be changed to "Real life examples" Following your suggestion, we have revised the heading and the examples have been augmented.
In revising the PILs, examples of portion sizes were given for commonly consumed fruit and vegetables [ 2].
For example, it revised the training program to emphasize soft skills, including leadership and self-confidence, instead of only technical merchandising skills.
Nevertheless we have revised the paper to add an example validated complex (5FMC) which was low-scoring using the individual approaches, but now become higher-scoring after integrating the 3 approaches together (due to the voting-based scoring).
We then applied the suggested system to a series of examples and discussed and revised the system based on this experience and the consideration of other examples.
Based on the first NCPS report for China released in 2011, and taking two typical industry pollutants, sulfur dioxide (SO2), and chemical oxygen demand (COD) as examples, we first revised the historical data concerning environmental statistics based on the NCPS documents.
As some examples: We extensively revised the text to clarify our presentation and our interpretations as requested.
* i.e., in the original CONSER example; LC later revised the record and recorded information about accompanying material in a note).
For example, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency EPAA) revised the fine particle NAAQS in 1997, 2006, and 2012 in order to protect public health (U.S. EPA 1997, 2006, 2013).
For example, after the bank revised the process for changing email passwords, its log files showed a rising failure rate.
