On a table at the front lay a final draft of the Declaration of Independence -- mostly composed by the 33-year-old Jefferson, with flourishes by Benjamin Franklin, John Adams and others -- handwritten and cluttered with strikeouts and revised passages, reflecting days of debate by the Second Continental Congress.
In response to critical outrage, many modern versions of "Passion" performances have removed or revised objectionable passages.
"Wide Awake" shows Mr. Berliner in the process of working and reworking his own material: rehearsing a line, revising a passage of narration, cutting tape, giving directions to the camera crew, playing with the sequence of shots, messing with sound cues, manipulating music and manically, meticulously preserving images from newspapers for his archive.
Highlight wording that would need to change to publish this article in a respected newspaper today and revise those passages.
The publisher of a controversial history textbook that many Asians say whitewashes Japan's wartime atrocities offered to revise several passages, including some parts that South Korea wants expunged.
To stop this from happening continue revising recent passages you have learned.
They also replaced the carburetors of 2012 models with responsive electronic fuel injection using larger-diameter throttle bores, revised the inlet passages and installed bigger intake valves.
" I have revised the offending passages.
Meanwhile he wrote and rewrote sections of Finnegans Wake; often a passage was revised more than a dozen times before he was satisfied.
In terms of history's judgment, his residual hope must now be that last week's publication of the Chilcot report marked rock bottom from which he might eventually be revised upwards when the passage of time lends a more rounded perspective on his record.
The second edition revised, and in sundry passages augmented / by the authour ; with advertisements and tables newly annexed in the end of the booke, an index whereof is present in the next page.
