He finished the original version of the opera in 1917 before turning 26, then revised it for its 1929 premiere.
JW, MM and MEB did the final draft of the manuscript and critically revised it for its intellectual content.
KP did the first and final draft of the manuscript and critically revised it for its intellectual content.
All the authors significantly contributed to the interpretation of the results and to the final draft of the manuscript, and critically revised it for its intellectual content.
CC, CG and PAT drafted the manuscript, while MdM, LG, EC, CG, WB, OG, SE, SB critically revised it for its intellectual content.
GVM conceived of the study, and participated in its design, interpretation of data, coordination, and critically revised it for important intellectual content.
Accordingly, Dodgson revised it for publication.
He revised it for the New York City Opera, under the title "The Triumph of St. Joan," and later derived a symphonic piece from the first version.
He therefore memorised in the night quiet each one of his hundreds of poems, carefully revised it for several days, and mentally filed it away.
Mr. Morris and Dick Scanlan revised it for the stage (with some new music by Jeanine Tesori) more than a decade ago.
(I may be partial to this work, having written a paper on Judd's work of the late 60's as a college student and revised it for publication in the 1975 catalogue raisonné of his work).
