This is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when you want to express that something has been revised or changed. For example: I found a mistake in the document and revised it as soon as possible.
During the next two years he revised it as De methodis serierum et fluxionum ("On the Methods of Series and Fluxions").
Bissett [37] then revised it as being co-specific with T. longibrachiatum.
"… using whole-cell patch-clamp method… " Now we have revised it as "using the whole-cell patch-clamp method…".
After permission was received, we conducted a pilot survey of the questionnaire and revised it, as suggested, for the final survey.
"… the main mechanism that leads to morphine-induced increase in VTA-DA neurons firing… " Now we have revised it as "…the main mechanism for morphine-induced increase in VTA-DA neuron firing…".
Now we have revised it as "Moreover, the strengthening influence of morphine on glutamatergic input to VTA-DA neurons is more relevant to its promoting effect on VTA-DA neuron excitation".
Then, once I've written a passage, I'm always prepared to go back and revise it as much as necessary to make it work well.
If you find the schedule is unreasonable, revise it as necessary.
Leaving the balance of the law in place so that Congress could revise it as it saw fit would not work, he said.
Second, superiors gain clarity about the implications of the direction they originally gave and may revise it as a result as Joe's bosses would probably do for the metrics.
You have to constantly managing your profile, revise it as you advance in your career, and use it to network as much as possible.
