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All coauthors reviewed, revised, commented on and approved the final version of the manuscript.

All authors revised, commented on the manuscript and approved the final version The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1472-684X/10/6/prepub No direct funding was received for this study.

TC revised and commented on the manuscript.

He critically revised and commented on drafts of the manuscript.

MW and SH revised and commented on the draft.

AJMS, JRA and AJvdB revised and commented on the manuscript.

PF advised on the review process, and revised and commented on the drafting of the paper.

HM, JRA, HK and JB revised and commented on the manuscript.

ZyZ and JS revised and commented on the draft and all authors read and approved the final manuscript.

All authors contributed to interpretation of results, revised and commented on the manuscript for important intellectual content.

TB participated in the design of the study, contributed with his expertise on the nutritional supplements, and revised and commented on the manuscript.