Sentence examples for revised a draft of from inspiring English sources

JA helped supervised the LaMNA bird banding stations and revised a draft of the article.

CS is the head of the Pediatric Gastroenterology Unit, approved the study design and strongly revised a draft of the paper.

HR supervised the analysis in the original study, developed the general idea of comparing the different approaches to measuring change, and critically revised a draft of the article.

DC participated in the design of the study, helped with the logistics of the field expedition and revised a draft version of the manuscript.

PN reviewed and revised a preliminary draft of the manuscript, provided guidance about the study's analytical approach, and helped design sampling activities as part of the MAPS network.

He's revising a first draft of a book "on SDI, Reagan, and [Edward] Teller.

Britain proposed to the Commission that the drinking-water directive be revised in accordance with a draft of new WHO standards.

These experts were consulted about a draft of revised STRICTA items that had evolved from previous research.

This week I was concerned to receive from the NAO a significantly revised final draft of this section incorporating new evidence, of which I was not and could not have been aware, concerning the BBC's internal process for approval of the payment to me.

He ended up quitting in anger during the last meeting in August 2006, after seeing a draft of the revised guidelines that, he said, contained none of his warnings.

Patrick D g, deputy chairman of the Free Democrats in Parliament and the party's spokesman on transportation issues, said he was hopeful that a draft of a revised law could be presented to Parliament within a few months.