Sentence examples for revised a draft from inspiring English sources

JA helped supervised the LaMNA bird banding stations and revised a draft of the article.

CS is the head of the Pediatric Gastroenterology Unit, approved the study design and strongly revised a draft of the paper.

DC participated in the design of the study, helped with the logistics of the field expedition and revised a draft version of the manuscript.

HR supervised the analysis in the original study, developed the general idea of comparing the different approaches to measuring change, and critically revised a draft of the article.

A committee is eventually named to revise a draft document for the new law.

President Bush asked the union to revise a draft directive on data protection for telecommunications, to be voted on in the European Parliament on Tuesday, "to permit the retention of critical data for a reasonable period," he said in a letter written by James J. Foster, the deputy chief of the United States mission to the union.

PN reviewed and revised a preliminary draft of the manuscript, provided guidance about the study's analytical approach, and helped design sampling activities as part of the MAPS network.

Although the bill gained broader support among Democrats after sponsors revised an early draft, it still has a long way to go.

Diplomats revised a US-proposed draft on Friday to accommodate Russian objections.

They will revise a final draft for her to submit for the state board's approval this spring.

He's revising a first draft of a book "on SDI, Reagan, and [Edward] Teller.