Sentence examples for revise this draft from inspiring English sources

All authors then helped revise this draft until final document consensus was reached.

DM prepared an initial draft and MKR, BKA and AH revised this draft and assisted in finalising the paper.

IN contributed data to the MONIKA database underlying this methodological investigation and critically revised this manuscript draft by bringing in ophthalmological expertise.

StS was principal clinical investigator for the MONIKA register underlying this methodological investigation and contributed a major part of its clinical patient data; furthermore she revised this manuscript draft by bringing in the trial site perspective.

HS helped to revise the draft and reorder the sequence of the draft.

HL helped to revise the draft.

ASM planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

JRG planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

MK planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

SMS planned the study, contributed to the application for funding and critically revised the draft of this paper.

AMcE secured funding for this study and revised the draft paper.