Sentence examples for revise the second from inspiring English sources

WRITER: I guess I could revise the second and third acts.

The results from the first round were used to revise the second section of the questionnaire.

As indicated above (comment 10), would the authors agree to rewrite the sentence " Although more research is needed, our results support that rTMS is safe to use in healthy control participants… " and revise the second part of it  " … invaluable in assessment of rTMS effects clinically " which to this reviewer is confusing?

He decided to write another volume after he set out this year to revise the first for a paperback, and realized his thinking had changed drastically.

In July 2006, screenwriter Chris Morgan was hired to revise the third act of the Wanted script written by Haas and Brandt.

Adams took out her editing pen and, from 1959 to well into the 1970s, she helped revise the first 34 books.

Fully revised, the second edition includes new data on inorganic optical materials, radiation detection inorganics, thermochromic compounds, piezochromic compounds, catalysts, superconductors, and luminescent (fluorescent and phosphorescent) inorganics.

Here, we have revised the second result of Theorem 1 in [26] since their proof is not clear under their assumptions.

JM revised the second draft.

Both quantitative and qualitative responses to the first Delphi round were considered in revising the second Delphi questionnaire.

Under this assumption, we revised the second term in (43) and the first term in (44) to r2 M R (H + T + TCD4 + TCD8) ∗ /(1 + C A / C ∞ ).