'revise it as' is correct and usable in written English.
You can use this phrase when you want to suggest a revision or improvement to something. For example: "The draft document is not very clear. Can you revise it as follows...?".
Then, once I've written a passage, I'm always prepared to go back and revise it as much as necessary to make it work well.
If you find the schedule is unreasonable, revise it as necessary.
Leaving the balance of the law in place so that Congress could revise it as it saw fit would not work, he said.
Second, superiors gain clarity about the implications of the direction they originally gave and may revise it as a result as Joe's bosses would probably do for the metrics.
You have to constantly managing your profile, revise it as you advance in your career, and use it to network as much as possible.
In both cases, he points out, the system not only will generate a hypothesis but then can go on to test it and revise it as a result of the testing.
During the next two years he revised it as De methodis serierum et fluxionum ("On the Methods of Series and Fluxions").
It even took very successful companies like Netflix many iterations until they found the right approach, and even to this point they may be still revising it as markets change and new competitors enter.
Bissett [37] then revised it as being co-specific with T. longibrachiatum.
"… using whole-cell patch-clamp method… " Now we have revised it as "using the whole-cell patch-clamp method…".
After permission was received, we conducted a pilot survey of the questionnaire and revised it, as suggested, for the final survey.
