"render this" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to express an instruction to do something such as: "Please render this report into a digital format for easy access."
Not much will render this pitch unplayable.
Only rarely and humorously must he render this confusing.
One day, artificial organs may render this debate irrelevant.
Touch-screens may eventually render this approach obsolete.
But Woodward doesn't render this rat-jump with the appropriate comic flair.
The near-infinite permutations of genetic sequencing render this outmoded approach all but infeasible.
Most modern translations render this phrase euphemistically, and somewhat comically, as "male".
But he added that the Presidential elections were likely to render this advance nearly irrelevant.
As we go though, we should be able to render this distinction moot).
It required a deal of philosophical inventiveness to render this situation benign.
The only question worth asking is what it will take to render this cinema obsolete.
