The phrase 'refining the draft' is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to the process of making small changes or adjustments to a draft document in order to improve it. For example, "The editor spent the afternoon refining the draft of the book before it was sent to the publisher."
SM was involved in refining the drafts and guiding the study development.
Biochemical information about cyanobacteria was obtained from the literature and biochemistry textbooks, and online biochemical databases were used to research several iterative methods of reconstruction and were used to refine the draft model; this is referred to as the "Refined model".
To refine the draft of the ICF template, we held repeated discussions with executive genome researchers of the MGSP and GSP.
To pretest and refine the draft GRCD, two iterative sets of cognitive debriefing interviews were conducted with caregivers of infants and young children with an RSV infection who were not hospitalized during the course of infection.
Moreover, to refine the draft model, metabolic gaps were identified by literature data and the GapFind (Satish Kumar et al. 2007) program in COBRA Toolbox v2.0 (Schellenberger et al. 2011).
Following a structured set of item generation principles, candidate daytime and overnight items intended to assess clearly observable signs associated with RSV infection were drafted and subsequently evaluated in iterative rounds of cognitive testing with an additional 23 caregivers (15 nonhospitalized children, 8 hospitalized children) to pretest and refine the draft GRCD questionnaire.
SM and TT refined the draft.
To refine the draft model, CELLO [ 41] and WoLFPSORT [ 42] were used to determine subcellular compartmentalization.
The first wave focus group results will be used to refine the draft Phase 3 questionnaires.
