"I was concentrating the whole time on refining my swing and trying to drive the ball more," he said.
I'm refining my craft and looking for the next job: building my wall, another book, and my sobriety.
"I was drawing parallels to my own life in terms of being a young emerging photographer, trying to make a name for myself and refining my craft constantly.
Throughout, I've been conscious of his voice while refining my own — instinctively applying Zinsserian admonitions, pruning the verbiage, savoring the luxury (to paraphrase Twain) of finding the right word rather than settling for the almost right.
"Developing and refining my own first reactions to my world is too important for me and my children to allow smart glasses to mix in and muddy the waters".
For now, the game has settled into a very-moreish rhythm of settlement expansion while working on the landscapes I expect to colonise tomorrow, the next day and beyond, and refining my farming and mining systems.
