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Officials were also puzzled by the lack of religious references in the first message, which instead had more of a nationalist tone.
He also observed that the references in the first paragraph to cooking and being a mother served as an effective setup for the "aha" of the second paragraph, which revealed that Mrs. Brill was an important scientist.
Authors' response: Indeed, we should have included these references in the first place, and we now do.
Regarding this section, we have followed the advice of Reviewer 3 and have included more original references in the first paragraph.
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(The Justice Shallow bits, with their intensely local country references in the second part of "Henry IV" come especially to mind).
The piece could use a better ending, and the references in the second scene to a Cranach painting that was Mr. Forsythe's starting point move the work uncomfortably closer to the kind of would-be intellectual dance spectacles with which he made his name in Europe.
Lou Reed called it "the funniest dirty book he'd ever read," and the "Severin," who Lou references in the fifth verse of his song, "Venus in Furs," is actually the name of the anguished protagonist.
Donne's cartographic references in the third stanza have been the subject of much analysis, although academics have differed in their interpretation of their meaning and what the lines reference.
Author's response: We agree that a brief comment about alternative translation is appropriate, and we have added a sentence and two references in the fifth paragraph of the Discussion about this item.
LH: Yes: The "Hair" reference in the first five seconds.
Now look again at the data referenced in the first paragraph.
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