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Even though Ms. Buck has severed her relationship with Vogue, to many readers the description just felt so, well, Vogue.
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In "How the Poor Die," what stays with the reader is the description of the administration of the mustard poultice: I learned later that watching a patient have a mustard poultice was a favourite pastime in the ward.
Rather than speculate about matters that transcend the limited capacity of the human intellect, Pascal invites his readers to recognize the description of his personal experiences as resonating with their own.
Even though I only intended to paint a vivid picture of the Italian scene as I experienced it, I've since removed the term: As some readers pointed out, the description wasn't essential to the narrative.
By making her characters play a text-based game in which the reader absorbs the descriptions of the cyberworld ("You are in a light, bright library, the outer chamber of the sphere where Lark lives and works") at the same time as the character does, she draws readers into the story more deeply than if everyone were simply sitting around pointing and clicking through a more visually oriented game.
How do you keep a reader gripped by the description of a society which has fallen apart and for which you feel no affection or respect?
Then, exchange paragraphs once more and perform the same exercise, changing the punctuation of the paragraph so that a reader would accept the description as that of the bank teller held at gunpoint.
In six (33 %) cases the readers description of location differed from the surgical/pathological tumour origin.
He hasn't aged at all! How does he do it?" I should mention, however, that several readers were unhappy at the description of former Muppets writer Chris Langham as "now disgraced", feeling there was no need for that prefix to his name.
Readers are referred to the description given by [ 87].
For at least one reader, after she read the description she downloaded the book thinking it was a murder mystery.
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