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Some don't like this, as they prefer to have some things kept mysterious, but personally I love the way that Auggie (and Nikki and Christopher) are fully described, the author giving all the tiniest details to help the reader imagine.
But it is the unseen Loyalists and especially their filets of perch, not the silly Fascists, who stay in the reader's mind, while with characteristic tact Fisher lets the reader imagine the scene later that day when, she knows, Chexbres must go down to the border and risk being shot as he smuggles the Loyalists across.
Photos help the reader imagine the end result more concretely and give inspiration to try the dish out.
This way of framing the story adds mystery, since it invites the reader imagine that the events of the story transpired.
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The empty space is where the reader imagines the poem.
Beaton consistently uses military terms ("campaign," "offensive," "conquest") for his pursuit, but the reader imagines something more archeological: the diarist in a pith helmet, venturing into an underground tomb in search of the mummified goddess.
Notoriously, the biggest burden for any author whose work is dramatised (for either stage or screen) is the complaints that A or B doesn't look at all how a certain reader imagined them.
If the reader imagines this experience might lead Keano to play it safe this time round, he disabuses us on page 16 when he describes a hotel punch-up with his Manchester United team-mate Peter Schmeichel.
It's not that the reader imagines that the novelist wants exactly the same things as his characters, ("power, money, fame, and beautiful lovers," as Edward Topping defines the prizes of the strong); it's that Wolfe's prose performs like the people it depicts, and is thus inseparable from them.
If politics can help a book attract readers, imagine what otherworldly sex can do.
Tweets, he has learned, work best in dialogue form, because dialogue helps readers imagine a scene.
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Since I tried Ludwig back in 2017, I have been constantly using it in both editing and translation. Ever since, I suggest it to my translators at ProSciEditing.

Justyna Jupowicz-Kozak
CEO of Professional Science Editing for Scientists @ prosciediting.com