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The camera is drunk or drugged and can't quite focus; trees, underbrush, and distant mountains float and heave in overexposed washes of blue, green, or purple light.
Instead, Mr Blomkamp's ramshackle film doesn't quite focus on anything, but blunders around from one gory shoot-out to the next without stopping to say anything coherent about robotics, law enforcement, South Africa or anything else.
With his shifty, deep-set eyes that don't quite focus, and features that never settle into a readable expression beyond cunningly faked naïveté, he projects an ominous disengagement behind which you sense a heart of ice.
These days the body can't keep up with the words and the words can't keep up with the mind, and the mind can't quite focus as it once did when he ran newspapers or spoke in the Commons.
His editor, Maxwell Perkins, told him that "the novel is a wonder," but that the main character was "somewhat vague," that "the reader's eye can never quite focus upon him".
I could not quite focus on what it had been about "Golden Land" that brought the story so insistently to mind, but one day when I was trying to come by some Lakewood High School yearbooks — "We've had a few people asking for those," the research librarian at the Lakewood branch library had said dryly — it occurred to me to look the story up.
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"You keep it quite focused.
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"Later on, I discovered that the information ministry officials had been quite focused on me.
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