Items derived from the focus interviews were integrated into a preliminary draft of the PEESS™ version 2.0.
In general, participants thought that the PEESS™ version 2.0 preliminary draft was much easier to understand than the PEESS v1.0.
Participants completed and reviewed the PEESS™ version 2.0 preliminary draft derived from the focus interviews and provided feedback utilizing the previously described respondent debriefing methodology [ 13].
Overall, responses to the PEESS™ version 2.0 preliminary draft were very positive, with participants reporting the response choices as much easier to understand than those in the PEESS v1.0.
The preliminary criteria for AN published in the beta draft version of ICD-11 are similar to those in DSM-5 (http://apps.who.int/classifications/icd11/browse/f/en).who.int/classifications/icd11/browse/f/en
I trust the authors that their implementation of this approach is technically sound, but, unfortunately, this is hard to ascertain from the submitted version of the manuscript, which reads as a preliminary draft devoid of the quantitative details.
Before receiving its definitive form, however, this work was to be rewritten in two distinct intermediate versions in manuscript: Novembre (1842) and a preliminary draft entitled L'Éducation sentimentale (1843 45).
The definitions of the preliminary domains of the questionnaire and the number of items per domain in the draft version are shown in Table 5.
LS reviewed the literature, analyzed the data and wrote the preliminary draft and RS conceived, designed and coordinated the study and edited the draft into the final version.
Editor, Draft Version 0.05, January 7 , 2012
