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The legend to Figure 1 has been revised.

The Figure 2 has been revised following the suggestion.

Another 11 had been revised or delayed, and there was no information on another eight.

Of the 25 knees that had failed, 19 had been revised for instability.

*Update, 10 20 A.M.: This post has been revised to include information about Oliver Sacks's 1993 article.

*Update, 8 30 P.M.: This post has been revised to include Apple's later proposed explanation for how hackers broke into celebrities' accounts.

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6 07 p.m.: This post has been revised throughout for updates and additional details. .

UPDATE 2: This story has been revised to include information from the HBO finale.

June 19, 7 22 p.m.: This article has been revised throughout. .

4 49 p.m.: This report has been revised for additional details. .