The part of the sentence "poor introduction" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to describe a situation in which an introduction to a topic, person, or event did not provide an adequate amount of information or context. For example, "The keynote speaker gave a poor introduction to the new product, leaving many questions unanswered."
"It's about first impressions," she said, noting that an unkempt porch is a poor introduction to your house.
Unfortunately, I think this has been a poor introduction to the world of Razer.
It was a poor introduction to Belarus, but you can't blame them.
This was attributed to the poor introduction of the CHAs to these local structures and committees.
Low use of CHW programmes has been linked to poor community introduction of the programme [ 9].
Africa has seen the biggest surges in pupil enrolment among the poor with the introduction of free primary education in countries such as Kenya, Ghana and Tanzania, but state schools still cost money.
Introduction Poor communication is associated with anxiety, distress and posttraumatic stress-related symptoms in families of both survivors and nonsurvivors.
Introduction Poor sleep is common in intensive care unit (ICU) patients, and environmental factors, such as noise and light, contribute to sleep deprivation and alterations of sleep architecture.
The uninsured rate had hovered around 15percentt in previous years, until the health care reform law's expansion of Medicaid to poor adults, and introduction of subsidized private health insurance for low- and moderate-income families became available.
For example, for cancers such as oesophageal and pancreatic with a generally poor prognosis, the introduction of chemotherapeutic regimens for advanced disease will have improved 1-year survival rates for patients irrespective of the proportion of early stage tumours in the populations (Rao and Cunningham, 2008; Starling and Cunningham, 2008; Mitry et al, 2008a, 2008b).
In conclusion, persistent infection with HCV led to a markedly poor prognosis, but introduction of IFN treatment before the age of 70 years reduced the risk associated with HCV infection and improved the prognosis to a level comparable to that of the general population.
