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In his polemical conclusion Mr. Khanna becomes a little unhinged in his analysis of the ills afflicting the United States, which, by his description, should collapse sometime in the middle of next month.
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He doesn't subscribe to all of Wilson's conclusions, but in his polemical book, The Blank Slate (2002), he makes his position plain.
However, I do strongly suggest making a number of changes: First, the tone of the paper begins as a scholarly discussion, then changes abruptly in the Conclusions section, becoming negative, polemical and defensive.
The conclusion I came to was less polemical than David Gale: I argued that the potential for killing innocents is too great to justify".
Given that a lot of pre-2008 prestedity rested on shaky grounds (a housing bubble, huge amounts of leverage and deregulatory policies that fueled the Wall Street meltdown), and given recent sprouts of hope on the economic front (a rising Dow, an improving jobs picture), it feels like a glib and premature conclusion to what is a revealing, if polemical, book.
Reviewers have been divided over whether to interpret the book as a polemical attack on Hubbard or a neutral work that leaves conclusions to the reader.
He wrote polemical journalism.
It was a polemical reaction.
Pow! Wonderful, robust, polemical stuff.
The polemical is political, after all.
If the book's polemical overtones rankle at times, its conclusion that religious coercion inevitably "produces a false uniformity that collapses as swiftly or slowly as social conditions permit"—is powerful.
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Since I tried Ludwig back in 2017, I have been constantly using it in both editing and translation. Ever since, I suggest it to my translators at ProSciEditing.

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