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Rather, they obscure the more interesting and valid points she wants to make in this lumpy and uneven book.
By unmooring the action from the points she wants to make, Ms. Pite creates a bit more room for the imagination.
Tommey has five points she wants party leaders to commit to, including: demands for improved training in autism for public sector workers, a commitment to building regional autism centres, and funding of further research into the condition.
Such sentimental whining undermines the larger and important points she wants to make in this volume — the notion that technology offers the illusion of companionship without the demands of intimacy and communication without emotional risk, while actually making people feel lonelier and more overwhelmed.
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"But she always had a wide array of points she wanted to make.
At some point she wants children, and she'd like to make some more decent movies.
Admittedly, I've never heard Miley recite Persian poets such as Rumi and Hafez, as well Oscar Wilde, to illustrate a point she wants to make, the way Raphaella does on our first meeting.
Her attempt to add the spice of Adam's pornographic fantasy to her night with Eric proves the point: she wants what she finds repellent; humiliation and pain are an inescapable aspect of pleasure (as they are of cinema, as I wrote here Friday with regard to "The Dictator" and "The Color Wheel").
Yes, she nodded vigorously, that was the point she wanted to make.
But the point she wanted to make was that, as she put it, "No man would ever have offered another man a job in that way".
"At one point, she wanted to quit because she didn't have enough authority," said Kenneth Rule, Ms. Navarro's boss at Gillette Mexico at the time.
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