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Donald Fehr, the executive director of the union, said two of the players' proposals would have the players take a fixed amount of revenue, which would turn into an approximate 50-50 split over the term of the deal, provided league revenues continued to grow.
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The league rejected the players' proposal".
The players' proposal retains the same basic structure and attempts to build on it.
The owners' plan would transfer $253 million, based on current revenue estimates, the players' proposal $188 million.
The players' proposal came a month and a day after Bettman and the owners made their first offer.
The clubs' negotiators have scoffed at the players' proposal to raise the amount of shared revenue from 20percenttoto 221/2percentnt.
The percentages relate to the players' proposal for an increase in the amount of local revenue the clubs would share.
"We want to make a deal," said Donald Fehr, the union's executive director, adding that the players' proposal "can lead to a stable industry".
What about the players' proposal to reform revenue-sharing, so that rich clubs give a lot more money to poor clubs?
Yet he seemed heartened by the financial part of the players' proposal, saying it contained "economic goals that we could probably mutually meet".
But Bettman's team had another important point to study in the players' proposal, one that came as no surprise: a broadened revenue-sharing program designed to help the half dozen or so N.H.L. clubs in financial trouble.
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