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When Troy was released in 2004, the cinemagoing public was treated to an attractive array of flesh and sandals, distracting nicely from a patchy plot and acting more wooden than the set's biggest prop.
Chanter is also a poet, and the novel's greatest power is not its patchy plot but its lyrical language: this unsettling tale about the mind in turmoil is awash with imagery of water as Chanter explores the sense of identity as fluid, truth a slippery thing, certainties dissolving.
The patchy plot of cartoonish Cold War skulduggery involves a couple of secret agents with the Hollywood monickers of Siegel and Widmark (played by the French New Wave icons Jean-Pierre Léaud and László Szabó), a novelist named after the noir writer David Goodis (Yves Afonso, a Jean-Paul Belmondo look-alike), and two young Cahiers du Cinéma critics playing Richard Nixon and Robert McNamara.
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"Reparation" raises thoughtful questions but, rather like that cemetery with its broken markers, Mr. DiIorio's patchy two-act play is strewn with plot fragments that do not always fit together.
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