The phrase "paragraph should read" is a correct and commonly used expression in written English.
It is typically used when you are referencing a previous paragraph, and wish to draw attention to its content. For example: As mentioned in the previous paragraph, the paragraph should read: "The importance of proper communication cannot be overstated."
In section 3.2 on page 4, the last sentence of the first paragraph should read "…and simple geometrical models of the head…".
In the Russian Wikipedia entry on Elton John, the first paragraph should read, "Elton John is a successful singer and songwriter, who has married his male partner owing to a severe shortage of Englishwomen.
After Theorem 6, the last sentence in the paragraph should read as follows.
The last three sentences of the second paragraph should read as follows: Jhuang et al. [20] present a hierarchical supervised method with spatio-temporal, gradient and flow filters organized in various layers of complexity.
The second paragraph should read as follows: Previous work [25] proposes 2D spatio-temporal compound features that are learned in a weakly-supervised approach using a data mining algorithm.
The last paragraph should read as follows: The approach is taken further by Schindler and Van Gool [24], who investigated the detection of actions from very short sequences called snippets.
2. DGE analysis, paragraph 10 should read: 'The raw image data were transformed by base calling into sequence data.
The second paragraph of 'Results' should read as follows: No deviation from Hardy Weinberg expectations was observed for any of the SNPs in either cases or controls.
Minor Essential Revisions Page 1, paragraph 2: "nocturnalcontrary" should read "nocturnal, contrary" Page 2, line 1, is missing a comma after "transcriptomic" and, if you follow the Oxford method, after "proteomic".
Try isolating the first sentence of each paragraph; together, they should read like a list of evidence that proves your thesis.
The paragraph should have read: "So who won this Derby, besides George?
