If your big idea isn't in the first paragraph, move it there.
When writing, he works on his paragraphs, moving commas backwards and forwards, retesting the sound each time: "Sometimes I'll have a sentence and I don't have the right word for the middle, I know I'm looking for a word that has a long 'A' sound and three consonants".
From paragraph to paragraph we move around through fact and memory alike, jumping back and forth through centuries and locations as fluidly as moving from one website to another, or laying different filters over film.
Writing on the page stays on the page, with its scribbles and rewrites and long arrows suggesting a sentence or paragraph be moved, and can be looked over and reconsidered.
Therefore, we shortened this paragraph and moved it to the Discussion.
And although data can simply be copied and pasted from one file to another, as paragraphs are moved in word processing documents, Mr. Schmidt said that the files in question are too large to make such operations practical.
If you are not interested, my recommendation is to skip this paragraph and move right into the festivities below.
Paragraph [C] moves towards documenting interactive tacit knowledge so that it can become a tangible asset within a data depository.
3) In the results, fifth paragraph, please move 'In 2006, the Food and Drug Administration ….' to the discussion; Response: Modified.
When writing your article, use a strong "anchoring" sentence at the beginning of each paragraph to move your reader forward.
