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Some audiences may find the "Godot -like pace of the plot maddeninGodot -like
Well, certainly some might be turned off by the leisurely pace of the plot.
The pace of the plot moves quickly and succinctly – finishing on a "to be continued" after 300 pages.
A TV adaptation would likely have altered the pace of the plot and perhaps focused more on the characterisation and the Hogwarts setting, and less on the overall struggle between Harry and Voldemort".
But besides a fleeting kiss the full-bore act doesn't happen, pace of the plot requires it.
He also keeps the rapid pace of the plot going from beginning to end, and makes you scared to turn to the next page.
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He wrote the screenplay for "The Bourne Legacy" with his brother Tony, and although "Nightcrawler" is much less of an action movie, the pacing of the plot is remarkably adept, and we never have long to wait before the next bend in the road.
Even in the straitened years of post-war reconstruction, he was soon selling millions of books a year.Admirers point to the quality of the drawing in Tintin, and the tense pacing of the plots, and they are right.
The game's opening salvo unfolds in mere minutes and this set-up is typical of the drum-tight pacing of the game's plot.
What's the pace of the game?
You control the pace of the game.
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