"our revision" is correct and usable in written English.
Example sentence: We need to go through our revision before the school year starts.
We describe our revision arthroplasty experience based on 20 cases performed over a 4-year period.
We also illustrate on the same benchmark problems that our revision always reports solutions that are feasible.
We then derive the conditional logic BCR from our revision postulates by means of a strong version of the Ramsey Test.
Our revision of the MOCI, the Vancouver Obsessional Compulsive Inventory (VOCI), was designed to provide assessment of a range of obsessions, compulsions, avoidance behaviour, and personality characteristics of known or theoretical importance in obsessive compulsive disorder (OCD).
By holding that Article II requires our revision of a state court's construction of state laws in order to protect one organ of the state from another, the chief justice contradicts the basic principle that a state may organize itself as it sees fit.
Our revision of the results in [1] is not merely a reproduction, as it includes some contributions of our own.
Before defining Ф P, we make a couple of remarks about the nature of our revision operator.
For most livestock types and regions, default livestock body weights and total feed requirements increased in our revision (Tables 1, 2).
For the most part, our revisions are in line with other revisions".
A Microsoft spokesman, Mark Murray, said, "We view our revisions as putting lipstick on a pig".
In response to comments, we revised the draft to emphasize these findings, so it's good to know that our revisions had the desired effect.
