The original had a draft version of the headline and standfirst.
The camera-man Herb is the only supporting character in the original draft who made it to the final version.
Yao-zhong Ding, Ya-nan You, and Dong-jie Sun contributed to the original draft of the paper and approved the final version.
While Arndt's original draft reportedly focused on the children of Han Solo and Princess Leia, the latest version is said to shift those characters into supporting roles.
Both phrases were removed from the later draft, about which Smith emailed: "Much happier with this version!" Hunt also goes into considerable detail in the original draft showing that he has already rejected the arguments of the bid's opponents.
Adams persuaded the committee to select Thomas Jefferson to compose the original draft of the document, which Congress would edit to produce the final version.
In fact, said another person who had seen an original draft of the memo, Mr. Brauchli's name was mentioned in the first version but he asked that it be taken out.
Atticus may have been a racist in Lee's original draft, but he became the Atticus we all love when she wrote the final version of her novel.
A consensus was reached on the basis of professional discussions among panelists, and in consequence the MIATA guidelines were upgraded to Version 1 [ 18], parts of which differ considerably from the original draft.
This draft version was translated back into English, by two English translators, and compared to the original questionnaire by the investigators and the original VES-13 authors, to assess comprehension of the applied concepts and wording.
