One revised version removed the emphasis on "only," asking instead whether these organizations should be allowed to hire people "on the basis of their religious beliefs".
And in its time, the song was used in two Gershwin shows -- one new in 1929, one revised in 1930.
Ms. Uggams said that one revised segment of the play "came from him watching me more and more, my interpretation".
But their adaptation of Kipling's "Just So Stories" has been floundering for years, in one revised version after another.
Prepare two versions of the author's note, one revised as fastidiously as the rest of the book, the other altered only along the lines you describe.
And that's the whole reason I started taking photos: to make a record against revisionism, against any one revising my life or what I saw".
One revised psychological-and-physiological car-following model is now adopted by Vissim [9], a well-known microscopic traffic simulation software.
New rules at NIH only permit you to submit a grant application two times: one original submission, and if not funded, one revised submission, in which you respond to the reviewers' critique.
Since I have less than half of my memoir to go, I'm going to measure my writing progress via weekly and monthly goals -- one revised chapter a week or three to four chapters a month.
While the West End production uses one revised by Harvey Fierstein, those I know who have seen it said he's done some cleanup and inserted some lines, but it's not a new take.
