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Include hobbies on your personal statement, it makes you a more rounded person.
Ibbott also advises concentrating hard on your personal statement; making the point that you've made an active, rather than default decision to apply for continued study: "It isn't a given you will apply to uni if you study BTec.
You've put other interests on your personal statement so make sure you put them into practice – get involved in as many activities and societies as possible and keep your interests broad.
Elektra James has parents who don't believe in her acting ambitions, but when she manages to persuade her parents to let her enter the world of acting (it looks good on your personal statement, don't you know), she enters a whole new world of struggles.
You may find that comments on your personal statement vary widely and even contradict each other.
When you ask others to provide feedback on your personal statement, ask them if the organization is logical.
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This article highlights the points of feedback I most frequently provide, focusing on ways to add substance to your personal statement. .
Proofread, have others proofread, and ask for more help on writing your personal statement.
Brian Rybarczyk has written two previous articles on how to write your personal statement for a graduate school application; you will find his earlier articles here and here.
This is meant to be your personal statement, so focus on the "personal" aspect and give readers some insight into who you are and your career goals.
Sell Yourself - Developing Your Personal Statement by B. Rybarczyk, 6 January 2006 Brian Rybarczyk gives students interested in applying to graduate school important tips on how to write an effective personal statement.
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