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All authors contributed to various drafts and agreed the contents.

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The authors would also like to thank Dr. Safiya Abouzaid who provided comments on the various drafts of this paper.

G.C., SC, MF, LF, EF, FM, RM, VN, SP, RP, AP, CR, AS, ST, DT, PV, AT have made substantial contributions to the conception of the study and to the development and validation of instruments, have organized and supervised data collection in each catchment area, and gave comments on the various drafts.