They were less engaged in discussion (22.2%) and did not have their own notes for revision (20.7%).
Make short notes for revision at the end.
In the bill's revision notes, seapower subcommittee members said the Marines and Navy did not do "proper analysis" before cancelling the EFV.
In the years to follow Hundertwasser and Mr. Doumani each crossed the ocean to see the other four or five times, in addition to sending numerous notes and revisions by mail.
It's a suspicion shared, perhaps unsurprisingly, by the RMT union, which has leaked what it believes is a draft prospectus for the east coast rail service's sale with handwritten notes and revisions in the margin.
This, too, careful readers could have guessed no one really talks in paragraphs as long and eloquent as some of Mitchell's characters do—and Kunkel has found notes and revisions that prove it.
This, too, careful readers could have guessed — no one really talks in paragraphs as long and eloquent as some of Mitchell's characters do — and Kunkel has found notes and revisions that prove it.
More important, White notes, earnings revisions have been very strong.
The document appears to be a draft version of the final sale brochure for potential investors, with handwritten notes and revisions in the margin.
In the past, she notes, monthly revisions to its jobs data have run as high as 700%, and in September and October, for example, the revisions were 45% downward.
