Sentence examples for notes on the draft from inspiring English sources

Hubbard sent him notes on the draft, but no film by that name was ever released.

In addition to Jari Taylor's already extensive notes on the draft, Piller suggested Biller get in touch with actual gang members or a police officer who could better clue the writer into street gang culture for the episode.

Then the producer gives notes on the first draft and another is written.

"It was a complete shock, the best notes on a draft that I have ever received," said the writer, who spoke on the condition of anonymity, citing his reputation.

He also notes that the Joint Committee report on the draft Communications Data bill was hugely critical about the lack of data ministers were able to provide to support assertions that expanding data capture powers for counter-terrorism purposes would save lives.

She did not only give notes on every script, she gave notes on every draft of every outline.

In an interview with a journalist, Peter Collignon, noted that the draft guidelines were issued on the presumption that xenotransplantation was acceptable notwithstanding its public health risks.

He noted this was one of the ISC's recommendations when it delivered a critical report on the draft bill earlier this year.

Harris notes that the highest volume of support on the draft candidate side goes to -- and this will not surprise you -- Ron Paul.

After you've made notes on your rough draft, transform it into a final draft.

As a result the book reads like a first draft of anthropology, early field notes on the American emotional landscape.