Exact(8)
Its proportions — big theme, simple situation, clear and subtle narrative — feel exactly right.
If you want to expand on anything in the narrative, feel free to do so.
Doing this makes the narrative feel more pointed than it actually is.
This layout makes the narrative feel choppy and, at times, unbalanced.
The key is to mix banter with action in a way that makes the narrative feel fresh without undermining its emotional power.
For all their sonic invention and rhythmic charge, the performances of "Navigation" have an essentially narrative feel, as if the combinations and improvisations reflected the musicians' personal relations and dialectical negotiations.
Similar(52)
This parallel narrative feels too tangential.
Its narrative feels at once perfunctory, jerry-built and weirdly contrived.
The entire setting of the narrative feels draped in ash -- dark, decrepit, weak, lifeless, sunless.
At times the narrative feels one whit too literary, the sumptuous writing occasionally trumping the starkness of a situation.
With the shaping consciousness of the author surgically removed, the narrative felt arbitrary and at times impenetrable.
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