The phrase "much affects" is not correct or usable in written English.
Instead, you should use the phrase "much affects" or "affects much." For example, "The decision affects much of the population."
Who your bishop is matters too much, affects too many people.
Defining what counts as a climate law is hard when so much affects the environment.
Caryn James's generally excellent article did not discuss one aspect of BBC America's service that very much affects my viewing of it: the editing of the original programs to include commercials.
"Inaccurate stories like this lead to a toxic public debate which very much affects how we treat refugees and migrants who are often in fear for their lives and futures.
"I've become so callous to the poking of the sword that, literally, instead of bleeding to death, the blood was drained and I became absent of concern, void of emotions, cold — plain cold to the degree that not much affects me anymore," he said.
In the two years in which he had a Democratic Congress, he passed the Affordable Care Act and oversaw a $36bn dollar expansion in Pell Grants, which very much affects students at Rutgers University-Newark, where I direct the MFA programme.
