It then tells user, "You're probably dying to assemble your classic!" Most writers, it explains, find moving paragraphs a spiritual TURBOEXPERIENCE.
But it actually made me realise that I'm really indecisive - I spend most of my time messing about moving paragraphs.
In a couple of short but moving paragraphs, the author recites a few such poignant moments before concluding, "Ever since these experiences, unemployment is not merely a statistic for me".
Try: Moving paragraphs around to get the best possible organization of points, the best "flow".
Minor comments Introduction : The authors might consider to move paragraph 4 starting with "The final ENS cell population is enormous…" after paragraph 1. Introduction, paragraph 3: citation Teillet et al. 87 ; here 1-2 papers from R. Mayor could be added (e.g. Theveneau and Mayor, 2012 ; Kuriyama and Mayor, 2008 ).
"They can move paragraphs around -- I'm cutting and taping all day," said Mrs. Goldstein, who pays to have her papers typed for her.
Substitution of one wording with another was counted as one change, the same for single insertions or deletions and for moved paragraphs.
"I am being precise because this is a statement being submitted to a court, Mr Brett," he interjected before moving to paragraph 20 of Foster's statement, which described how, after some research, he came to a point where "I felt sure that the blog was written by a real police officer".
3. Since the dn/ds differences report in paragraph 3 of the results ("To determine whether positive selection... ..........) were not statistically significant, it might make sense to move this paragraph after the following paragraph (describing Fig. 2 and epitope vs. non-epitope Fisher tests), whose dn/ds differences were statistically significant.
The article was further amended on 4 April 2014 to edit and move a paragraph about Titan Aerospace, which had appeared under the subheading "Bought by Facebook".
