Minor comments Introduction : The authors might consider to move paragraph 4 starting with "The final ENS cell population is enormous…" after paragraph 1. Introduction, paragraph 3: citation Teillet et al. 87 ; here 1-2 papers from R. Mayor could be added (e.g. Theveneau and Mayor, 2012 ; Kuriyama and Mayor, 2008 ).
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In a couple of short but moving paragraphs, the author recites a few such poignant moments before concluding, "Ever since these experiences, unemployment is not merely a statistic for me".
Substitution of one wording with another was counted as one change, the same for single insertions or deletions and for moved paragraphs.
Try: Moving paragraphs around to get the best possible organization of points, the best "flow".
Vlady, who survived the travails of Europe and ended up with his father in Mexico, also contributes a moving paragraph on Serge's death (by heart attack in Mexico City in 1947 at the age of 57).
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3. Since the dn/ds differences report in paragraph 3 of the results ("To determine whether positive selection... ..........) were not statistically significant, it might make sense to move this paragraph after the following paragraph (describing Fig. 2 and epitope vs. non-epitope Fisher tests), whose dn/ds differences were statistically significant.
