To make the manuscript more streamlined, we also moved most of the hormones section (Results and Discussion) to the appendix (Appendix 1), where they were explained and discussed in more detail without diverting the focus of the manuscript.
Accordingly, we have made alterations in the text in the Results section; those did not adversely impact the major conclusions, but offered more streamlined logical progress in the revised manuscript.
Essential revisions: 1) Please revise the manuscript to provide more focus on the major conclusions and message and a clearer, more streamlined description of the experiments and data.
"The more streamlined, the more tranquil".
Smaller and more streamlined curriculum?
TaxCut has the more streamlined interview process.
The new car is more streamlined and direct.
Office staff became more streamlined, efficient and satisfied.
The new Kylian dancers are more streamlined and lighter.
(City Ballet dances "Theme" in a faster, more streamlined style).
