"more precise description" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used in any sentence where you want to emphasize the need for a more specific or detailed explanation. Here is an example: "The initial report was vague and lacked key details, so we requested a more precise description of the incident."
For a more precise description of the wood surface community composition, we analysed the communities at the OTU level.
— Daniel Burns, Hyattsville, Md .I understand readers' frustration that we didn't provide a more precise description of the official.
But that's the style that I believe will eventually permit a more precise description of Santa Barbara terroirs.
Objective: To derive a more precise description of vocal fold vibration, experimental phonation of excised canine larynxes was studied.
The French title, "Les Amours Imaginaires," is a more precise description of this palpitating confection, a study of an unconsummated romantic triangle.
In nearly 20 years in journalism, in every case I've seen the word "ethnic" used, it's been a weak option compared to a more precise description.
3D Finite element analysis demonstrates that the AOP model can yield a more precise description of CSWs compared with the ECW model in MIDAS.
Knowledge of a coating occurrence, their structure and hydraulic properties is required for a more precise description of water flow and contaminant transport in soils.
Moreover, the introduction of a multidimensional model of macrophage activation allows a more precise description of monocytes and macrophages under homeostatic and pathophysiological conditions.
This model was believed to provide a more precise description of the stability characteristics of a vaccine than the current "compliance model".
When Ferrari was a small-scale operation building several hundred cars a year, collectors — speculators might be a more precise description — could gobble up part of the company's annual output and park their new toys in climate-controlled garages.
