"more description of" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when you want to provide additional information about something. For example: The report gave an overview of the project, but more description of the individual components was needed.
A little more description of the polar landscape might have leavened the prose.
Yes, I would have liked more description of the actual brewing process, perhaps even some demonstrations.
Broyard wrote: If I have to read one more description of the garbage piled up in the streets of Harlem, I may just throw protocol to the winds and ask whose garbage is it?
Broyard wrote: "If I have to read one more description of the garbage piled up in the streets of Harlem, I may just throw protocol to the winds and ask whose garbage is it?
Counsel assisting the commission, Peter Callaghan SC, in his opening remarks said he and his co-counsel agreed with the commissioner Mick Gooda's past statements that there was no need for more description of the issues, and that the enormity of past reports not acted upon invited a question.
Besides a sloppy use of language ("Templeman's sharp and insulting tongue clashing with Malloch's violent temper"), Niven has an unfortunate weakness for cliche, with fateful tales, narrow escapes, hearts sinking and a sun "lifting its burning head over the earth". A little more description of the polar landscape might have leavened the prose.
So the last thing Arundel wanted, Jones argues, was more descriptions of rip-off churchmen.
We'll get yet more descriptions of a 'closed community', full of danger and an 'it could happen again' mentality.
We desperately need more descriptions of what the hell is going on in all those niches in finance.
Entertaining anecdotes abound, but there are more descriptions of mangled bodies than information or insights about strategy.
One of the readers of my first novel, "Memories of My Ghost Brother," mentioned that it had more descriptions of smell than any other book he had read.
