"may require revision" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when something needs to be changed or improved. For example, "The instructions for using the new software may require revision."
Current requirements for ACLS certification and training for obstetric staff may require revision.
With time, some joint replacements may require revision, mainly because of instability and mechanical loosening, and this is of particularly significance to younger patients.
Optimizing these factors in existing spaces may require revision of an endoscopy unit's operations and, possibly, renovation of the endoscopy suite.
Aseptic loosening of the tibial component; which may be caused by mechanical stress shielding in the bone and may require revision surgery; is the primary concern of total knee replacement (TKR).
Basic assumptions may require revision.
Cuff failure at this point may require revision surgery.
(3) Studies of how science has ignored women and gender, and how turning attention to these issues may require revisions of accepted theories.
Their withdrawal may require revisions to the computer's configuration, which could affect software being developed by other consortium members, says Tadashi Watanabe, a supercomputing expert heading the project for RIKEN.
These may or may not require revision to longer stem implants.
All patients will eventually require reoperation due to the presence of a conduit, and some may also require revision of the distal unifocalized bed.
All patients will eventually require reoperation because of the presence of a conduit, and some patients may also require revision of the distal unifocalized bed.
