Sentence examples for manuscript to remove from inspiring English sources

Therefore, we have rewritten the manuscript to remove the indications of cause-effect relationship between looping and gene activation.

We have edited the manuscript to remove all speculation about the role of AaegTRPA1 in the natural environment of host seeking.

We have revised our manuscript to remove the data on deltaC in these rescue experiments in order to simplify our paper.

Author response: Following this comment, and a suggestion made by Pierre Pontarotti on the phone, I have now modified the manuscript to remove the statement about 'the clear orthologous relationship of CD94L molecules within the primate or the rodent orders'.

We believe that with a thorough rewrite of the manuscript, to focus on describing the data clearly rather than making interpretations of the data, both in terms of its relevance to particular social behaviours, and in terms of causal mechanisms that are not supported directly by the data, it will be possible to improve the manuscript to remove these concerns.

If the reviewers disagree, we are willing to edit the manuscript to remove the comment on HGT. 2. On page 8 the authors show a higher ratio of non-polar to polar residues in extremophilic and archaeal GGTs which is interesting but I'm not sure why they don't calculate the statistical significance of this result.

We have revised the figures and manuscript text to remove the two issues identified by the referee.

My main suggestion for improving the manuscript is to remove or re-word certain parts of the paper that deal with philosophical interpretations of the second law of thermodynamics, or that misapply this law (which is very common).

Authors' response: In revised manuscript, the procedure to remove the redundant or duplicate peptides has been described.

We have replaced Figure 4C with the blot in Figure 5A (previously a supplemental figure in the original manuscript), so as to remove any confusion about how the experiment was performed.

When Lady Gregory read the manuscript she advised Synge to remove any direct naming of places and to add more folk stories, but he refused to do either because he wanted to create something more realistic.